JSKIS

@-LadiesMan217- Oh and as for your planned NSFW scenes ,I would say try and keep it tasteful and not change the story entirely to a Romantic story without keeping the main Action , fast-paced elements. From personal experience reading stories from readers who have fallen into the "horny trap" I would say try adding one every 9/8 chapters after the confession and meeting has happened blah blah blah , making your readers get excited every now and them in your comments.

@-LadiesMan217- I personally really like your story so far . It obviously has more exciting moments than canon but as someone who deeply studied Japanese manga the difference between canon and yours (if it was drawn) is bigger than you think (in a positive way) . I would recommend Tarnished and Warrior of The Sky  for inspiration as they are some great long page stories that manage to maintain pace and interest throughout their stories . Keep it up and I believe your story could be such a great Wattpad binge while maintaining constant interest!