owlneo

Hey you alive man?

You're an amazing writer! I like your vampire story

If I may Suggest You should try and put a bit more Emotion into their characters Because it feels like it's slightly rushed Because then it gives the characters more meaning and impact to each other among other things Other Is then that As each day you write you slightly improve and the improve can eventually be seen so Keep up the good work You don't have Listen to me I'm but some random person but it's just a suggestion Have a good day/night mate

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          I love elaina books afterall

You, yes you, you will grow big one day. Just got a feeling.