-cinderbella-

Thanks for the follow! Would you mind checking out my book MENDES? I am just starting out with writing and would love some feedback! Have a nice day ahead.
          
          ~Ally.

-cinderbella-

@ozanas_1007 oh, thanks for the feedback. I'll work on it right away! Hope you're enjoying my book! ^-^❤
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ozanas_1007

@sexybitch_003 I think it is kinda cool storywise. I loved it. I found some grammatical mistakes but  it did not affect the overall reading experience. In all, it was great.
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