
Atlantaes
Hey lovely, I'm sorry it took me so long to get to your book. I think you've got an amazing plot going on that's packed with potential. My main advice is to really show not tell. You've got great dialogue going for you, but sometimes it's hard to follow due to the lack of description and settings in the book. Keep up the good work! ^_^

pacificallymad
@Atlantaes (*ˊᗜˋ*)ᵗᑋᵃᐢᵏ ᵞᵒᵘ so much unnie for the advice I'll surely look forward to it I'm glad you read it..
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