paddycarr

Greeting ladies and gentlemen I would like you all to check out my romance novel BLACK ROSE. Check out the prologue at least its not even a 1000 words. It starts with a bang. 
          	
          	Below is a link to the prologue it would mean a great deal if I could hear one or two opinions. Appreciate it much. 
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/706483222-black-rose-prologue

Michael_Houston

Howdy! Looks like we've been matched for Glittering Gems. I'm looking forward to getting into Of Sinners and Saints. I've been told to expect a wild ride.

paddycarr

@Michael_Houston Great sounds great basing your story on this statement I can tell the story has legs. I have a few deaths in mine. Some gruesome some not so. So I like that you have got death in your tale. Yeah like I said over the weekend I will certainly check out at least 3 chapters this week so I will.
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Michael_Houston

@paddycarr It's funny you should ask, because when the story was in my head, before I started writing it, I always envisioned it as really dark and gritty. What came out when I put pen to paper was more farcical and banter-driven. Not so much in the first few chapters (during which the story was going through a bit of an identity crisis), but definitely from about Chapter 4 onward.
            
            All that said, there should be enough tragic deaths and cosmic injustices to tide people over.
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paddycarr

@Michael_Houston So tell me a little abooot yer story man? aAny darkness?
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LadySapphire2018

Congrats on the account, good luck with the contest you're hosting, and thanks for adding The Seven Kingdoms to your reading list.

paddycarr

@LadySapphire2018 Thanks so much really appreciate it. Look forward to seeing what people think of it. I have changed it around First 35 chapters edited.
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LadySapphire2018

Awesome. I asked the admin about your question. Just waiting a response.
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paddycarr

@LadySapphire2018 No worries man yeah I will read more over Christmas when I have the time. Reading a decent book at the minute for the WWBC
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