1. At one place, you spelled Ana "Anna."
Other than that, though, this is amazing! It's amazing that you gave Anorexia a name and a personality. It's amazing how you start with something that everyone can relate to--how Anorexia seems so loving, caring, and helpful. Then, you transition to the realization that Ana is really actually evil, and it transitions very nicely. Finally, the poem makes the reader aware of what Anorexia really does. This will make a lot of people think.