paigiexoxo16

@live_nightmares thanks :)

HardcoreAngel

1. At one place, you spelled Ana "Anna."
          Other than that, though, this is amazing! It's amazing that you gave Anorexia a name and a personality. It's amazing how you start with something that everyone can relate to--how Anorexia seems so loving, caring, and helpful. Then, you transition to the realization that Ana is really actually evil, and it transitions very nicely. Finally, the poem makes the reader aware of what Anorexia really does. This will make a lot of people think.

HardcoreAngel

This is for Ana Killed me. It was saying that it wouldn't let me post it on the poem, so I posted it here.
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