@JokeWasOnMe
Hi, i'm not english, so sorry for how i speak, but i gone try for the feedback.
So, I loved your storie.
The only "negative" point (and "negative" is a strong word)is the ending. I feel it lacks a bit of detail. It’s just that he learns the secret and that all, the next chapter is the end. End of the initiation, and end of the book.
But that’s really just a minor detail, I’m nitpicking (not sure if that’s the right word in english ).
Your book is excellent, your writing is just as good, and the story is incredible.
I loved it
So thanks for this beautiful storie and thanks for making Eric look cute (i don't like toxic romance)
