palisva

Empathy Is My Curse
          	
          	The pain ripped my heart like a knife
          	A pain that is not mine,
          	Yet I felt it in my core.
          	
          	It broke down my defenses,
          	Left me numb to reality.
          	
          	Tears sting my eyes,
          	Crushing me,
          	Like the burning fall
          	Of the sun to earth.
          	
          	My heart swelled with such pain,
          	I wanted to tear it open.
          	But I guess empathy
          	Is a curse to mankind.
          	
          	The weight of sorrow
          	That cannot be touched,
          	But only felt.
          	
          	Pain I cannot hold,
          	Yet it holds me.
          	Empathy is my curse.
          	
          	Thoughts? Wrote this in my feelings 

palisva

Thank you  I am glad you like it 
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Mslittledee

@palisva If a poem perfectionist was human
          	  It's so beautiful fr. 
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palisva

Empathy Is My Curse
          
          The pain ripped my heart like a knife
          A pain that is not mine,
          Yet I felt it in my core.
          
          It broke down my defenses,
          Left me numb to reality.
          
          Tears sting my eyes,
          Crushing me,
          Like the burning fall
          Of the sun to earth.
          
          My heart swelled with such pain,
          I wanted to tear it open.
          But I guess empathy
          Is a curse to mankind.
          
          The weight of sorrow
          That cannot be touched,
          But only felt.
          
          Pain I cannot hold,
          Yet it holds me.
          Empathy is my curse.
          
          Thoughts? Wrote this in my feelings 

palisva

Thank you  I am glad you like it 
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Mslittledee

@palisva If a poem perfectionist was human
            It's so beautiful fr. 
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palisva

Am I the only one that haven’t seen my novel in the wiwcontest ranking? 

palisva

So crazy 
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palisva

I just found mine  so many entires 
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jenniferdare

It’s hard to find them it took me while to figure out how to see mine also. You can filter it to new after hitting the witw tag and it will pop up! 
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