hi
could you please check out my fanfic (and maybe leave some feedback) and if ya want ill do the same with yours all ya have to do is ask.
http://www.wattpad.com/10151460-the-arrow-that-missed
Whenever I'm sad or think about her, I come here. To relax while walking down the beach, the cold breeze all around. The sound of the waves, cool and calm. I've realized this one thing, “it takes a minute to have a crush on someone, and an hour to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone." You realize the real importance of someone when they go away from you.
But sometimes they go so far that it becomes impossible for them to ever return. I might have everything you could have dreamed of: wealth, fame, fortune. But the thing my heart craves for the most is not with me and never will be. My life was perfect. We were so happy together, but she had to leave me, why, why, why?
I'm not ruining my future because of my past; it's just that I can't forget my past. It's too precious to let go of. Moving on is simple; it's what you leave behind that makes it so difficult. It's too late for me, but you still have time, here is a word of advice: if you love someone, you should tell them, because there might not be a tomorrow!
A great man once said, "a million words wouldn't bring you back, I know because I’ve tried. Neither would a million tears, I know because I’ve cried." I only understood the true meaning to this when it struck me in the heart. Day and night, I craved for her, just for that one last hug, for that one last kiss and for that one last glimpse.
I'm Niall Horan and this is my story...
thank you
xx