thank you so much for vote and comment dear it means a lot !! and if you want you can check out my new one shot Wrong Date , Right Spy you will surely going to enjoy !!
first of all I am grateful you point out my mistakes and then a very sorry that you didn't want to read further which is totally okay .And I myself notice the character part was too much complicated but when I started this story I just did it for fun but didn't notice that I was not mature enough about writing stories nor I know how to put emotions in lines that's why this blunder happen but soon I am Going to remove this story from this platform not forever but for sometime to put many things together which I find cringe so hope that time you will give a try to my book and a very sorry to disappoint you
@MyWorld_Myfiction
you're such a precious little soul, so many apologies you're carrying on your back out there alone.. here come, lemma give u hug ⊂((・▽・))⊃, I'm not the user of this account, but your message made me soft..
@MyWorld_Myfiction I publish it in your leader board for that a very sorry but I already removed my story so Idk that you will get the comment or not but for many days I thought to remove the book and your comments encourage me that it will be the best choice so thank you for that dear