pancakethehen
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hey all!! so like. about misplaced and disgraced right. yeah uhm. im not happy with it?? ive recently done a entire reread of the chapters and im thinking like. wow. ts stinks. in which YES. it does stink.
uhm. so i just want to say,, ive actually been thinking abt a redux. and yeah, ik that sucks to whoever enjoys this story (maybe one or two people idk), but i legit cannot in good conscience continue this while knowing its a pile of hot garbage. uhm. i mostly dont like the personality i gave to V1, and me setting this whole thing up DIRECTLY after 3-2. now THAT stinks. also, i think i added WAYYY too much introspection on gabe’s part. ALSO ALSO, i think i was moving the relationship too quickly. ALSO ALSO ALSO, after 3-2, gabriel fucking HATES V1. and i made him discard his hatred too early.
so. uhm. im actually gonna set this up after 6-2, in which gabes actually becomes a little. freaky? idk, i think during his second phase he basically enjoys the pain a little too much?? eh. hes a masochist. its fineeee. so. not only will basically that change, but im actually gonna make it so gabes and vi wun explore. more. before they actually integrate gabes into getting a job. so yh. also LESS INTROSPECTION LETS GO. i basically tried wayyy too hard on introspection w MaD, in which basically over half of gabes part in the early chapters IS introspection. in which, yeah he’ll do a little bit of it, but not THAT much. also i dislike how i characterized him. i made him a bit of a suck-up, (too much actually), and i think thats the wrong way to go. would add more but this community post is getting too long.
so. you might be asking. ‘well what will happen to the old story?’ great question! im deleting it after i get all of the current chapters out reduxed. which will take a few weeks to two months, give or take. production will be slowed considering that i gotta move my ass for bmwo, so expect late chapters until we are done.
farewell my hooligans!! seeya soon!!
A_Bigger_Idiot
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@pancakethehen Pancake. Look at me. Or well the digital screen. You update every millennia. No. Eon. You have your children on Ao3, the chapter for blood mixing with oil and now this. We are not getting shit done Also I feel like the story was good!!! But I do understand the hate on your own story. That's the whole reason I made a rewrite. Guh lock!!!
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pancakethehen
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hey all!! so like. about misplaced and disgraced right. yeah uhm. im not happy with it?? ive recently done a entire reread of the chapters and im thinking like. wow. ts stinks. in which YES. it does stink.
uhm. so i just want to say,, ive actually been thinking abt a redux. and yeah, ik that sucks to whoever enjoys this story (maybe one or two people idk), but i legit cannot in good conscience continue this while knowing its a pile of hot garbage. uhm. i mostly dont like the personality i gave to V1, and me setting this whole thing up DIRECTLY after 3-2. now THAT stinks. also, i think i added WAYYY too much introspection on gabe’s part. ALSO ALSO, i think i was moving the relationship too quickly. ALSO ALSO ALSO, after 3-2, gabriel fucking HATES V1. and i made him discard his hatred too early.
so. uhm. im actually gonna set this up after 6-2, in which gabes actually becomes a little. freaky? idk, i think during his second phase he basically enjoys the pain a little too much?? eh. hes a masochist. its fineeee. so. not only will basically that change, but im actually gonna make it so gabes and vi wun explore. more. before they actually integrate gabes into getting a job. so yh. also LESS INTROSPECTION LETS GO. i basically tried wayyy too hard on introspection w MaD, in which basically over half of gabes part in the early chapters IS introspection. in which, yeah he’ll do a little bit of it, but not THAT much. also i dislike how i characterized him. i made him a bit of a suck-up, (too much actually), and i think thats the wrong way to go. would add more but this community post is getting too long.
so. you might be asking. ‘well what will happen to the old story?’ great question! im deleting it after i get all of the current chapters out reduxed. which will take a few weeks to two months, give or take. production will be slowed considering that i gotta move my ass for bmwo, so expect late chapters until we are done.
farewell my hooligans!! seeya soon!!
A_Bigger_Idiot
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@pancakethehen Pancake. Look at me. Or well the digital screen. You update every millennia. No. Eon. You have your children on Ao3, the chapter for blood mixing with oil and now this. We are not getting shit done Also I feel like the story was good!!! But I do understand the hate on your own story. That's the whole reason I made a rewrite. Guh lock!!!
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zilhaziq
Well perhaps I gave you some to read about something else a Gmod crossover story you actually like it if you want to or not.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/388874720-rdm-rdm-rdm-arknights-x-gmod
zilhaziq
@pancakethehen is good to hear that the person make this Gmod crossover story is so creative and funny even the fight and war are the best part is sometimes is chaotic as hell I am surprised players use All Star Characters like V1 and Doom Slayer some chapters scenes even Hatsune Miku and her friend's to still awesome story this person make.
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pancakethehen
@zilhaziq ohhh yeah this. i saw it on idiot’s feed and i read it. its good lmao. :]
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pancakethehen
ok so like. its been a month since my last chapter release. i think itll come out soon. be prepared!!!! maybe!!!!!!!!!! this chapter WILL see gabes job hunting!!!!!!!! but mostly him and the machine being insignificant fucks together (tee em) ouuhhhhh!!!!!!!! yeah. uhm. lolll. for the person who already knows where im taking the chapter. well uh. lol. you alr know so that doesnt matter. guhhhh.
pancakethehen
so if you read the summary, its supposed to be OUR earth. i was inspired by a fic from Ao3 in which gabes gets teleported to our earth.
also no i can do that. its fine trust :]
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A_Bigger_Idiot
HELL YEAH. Also what type of earth are they on? Like Advanced today Earth or more prehistoric times?
I guess I'm making the next chapter for blood mixing with oil as well
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A_Bigger_Idiot
New chapter for the ultrakill story
And the choice for Oneshot =)
A_Bigger_Idiot
SUPRISE SUPRISE!
The finale is already out. I haven't done anything but write since I woke up. I'm finally taking a break.
A_Bigger_Idiot
I genuinely haven't eaten anything but a piece of dry bread and some solid cold cheese. I need help
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A_Bigger_Idiot
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How much longer must I wait to be able to consume the next chapter of our Gay bird man and insignificant fuck
A_Bigger_Idiot
I'm here to spread the word of the fact that the Ultrakill story got a new chapter. And i'm bored as hell as well. Okay yeah that's it. I'm just feeling lonely.
A_Bigger_Idiot
Aight. Here's the doc
https://docs.google.com/document/d/19WMNYD19DJUToEUZe3ECgpJE2GR9TKqqMuPtc8cBny0/edit?usp=drivesdk
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pancakethehen
@A_Bigger_Idiot coolio coolio cooliooooo. i would have to rewatch the entirety of murder drones again to nail down making it though :3
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A_Bigger_Idiot
Honestly. Could be fire. But it's 100% gonna take a long ass time with our y'know difference in time. School. Writing. Honestly tho. Why the hell not. Just so you know i've already got some ideas i've written down.
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A_Bigger_Idiot
I think I might be a workaholic. I PHYSICALLY CAN'T BURN OUT. I'm already posting a new story so I can manage not writing the Oneshot one.
And it's about Ultrakill this time
pancakethehen
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@A_Bigger_Idiot awh hell naw mans fucking gabriel. workaholic ass smh. coolio ill go check it out
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A_Bigger_Idiot
AHHH I THINK I JUST MADE MY FAVOURITE CHARACTER EVER IN THE NEWEST CHAPTER
I made two and the second one made me genuinely feel heartbroken writing the story despite knowing damn well I could change it.
(Also sorry if your in school rn.)