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hi, would you mind checking out my story. Maybe critic it a bit and suggest ways to improve it? Sorry I sound so demanding. hahaha. but i'd really appreciate it if you do.
          
           is about a young rich boy who fights his attraction towards a bratty mean girl.
          
          Also, you could suggest some of your stories to me in exchange.
          
          thanks!!
           https://my.w.tt/UiNb/UbMscjHNLH

Hey Stefanie!
          Ok so I've started writing this book The Felon and I would love to have a feedback from you. 
          Please give my work a chance of read. 
          I hope it'll be worth it. 
          Grazie. 
          Have a great day ahead!
          
          

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