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@ahud94 That sounds interesting. I will plot the idea to my co-write, and we will have a talk about it

@pandagirl-22 i agree with anni-hh. cliff hanger only if there is a book 3. 
            maybe a time jump and having to rescue Hensley from something/someone.... roger orchestrated from prison

@Anni-hh if we were to write a third book what would you like to see happen

@Geike88 thank you, if there's anything else you would like to add or if I have done something wrong let me know and I will add or change it.

Its really good its just how i imagined it you made it perfect

@Geike88 going to upload two chapters just need to read through them to makes sure everything is ok. What do you think of it so far is it what you imagined

Happy New Year

@Geike88 uploaded a mini teaser

@Geike88 Wow, that sounds like an amazing idea. Me and my co-writer were actually wanted to write a new story so we will come together and work on it. Thank you  

Part 2: The men where not happy with het so they turned to marjorie who has finally woke up. Autumn knows they’re gonna hurt her and says to not hurt her and treathen them even more. The man decides he has enough and tapes aut mouth shut and turns back to marj who is now in fear of what they are gonna do to her the man gets on top of marj and decides hes gonna r*pe her autumn is know steaming with anger so she tries everything to come loose from the chair she’s tied to marj is screaming in pain from the man r*ping her after a while aut breaks free and attacks the man who’s r*ping marj she was about to kill him when the other one pointed a gun at her head. ( this was all happening in 2 days and mia was worried so she called the police ) aut stoped what she was doing and put her hands in the air the man ties her back to the chair and got his buddy cleaned up. While the men where away autumn kept apologising to marj for what happend she promised her she was gonna fix it and so she was gonna do that. Aut stole the phone from the man and was gonna call mia but she couldn’t because she was tied to the chair so marj picked up the phone and called mia. She explained everything to her where they are and to come and get them and she was already on her way. When the 2 man came back into the room they saw that they had called the police and needed to go. But not with the women alive he pickes up the gun and shootes them both leeving them to die. Only 10 min later mia the police and the ambulance arives. They rushes to the women to the hospital and they both make it through. Then somewhat later in the story they fall in love but that is the part i’m not good at ( please feel free to add your own details to make it better ) 

@pandagirl-22 , Oh aight

@Elliettn thought it would be a nice Christmas present to all my readers. I will also be posting two chapters for my fiancées sister VOL.2 as well. It's to say thank you to everyone for all the nice comments. Me and my co-writer (partner) are truly grateful

So excited about this, have a good Christmas