pangitkulyit

hello! :)

Mirokou27

Gud eve 
          First of all I would like to say thank you for giving me the opportunity to critic your work :)
          Finally, a thriller story :)) naiba din ang genre na binabasa ko :)) anyways I salute you na tinaray mo ang thriller story. Yes, nandun ang element of mystery, takot at pagkakaba. The characters are well portrait in the story :) the uniqueness is somewhat there :) The thing lang na hinahanap ko ay yung exciting part :) yung mapapatalon ang puso ko sa takot at mapapaisip ako sa mystery ;) Its also good if lagyan mo sya ng comedy element All in all 8 out of 10 sya sakin :) so ayun lng thank you ulit and im looking forward for the development of your story

pangitkulyit

@Mirokou27 salamat sa constructive criticism. and about dun sa exciting part, mejo hindi ko muna ginagawang hard core kasi first chapters pa lang. pero nonetheless, thank you very much :)
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