sydburt11

Sorry about the late notice, but thanks for following me. If you would like to, please read my book. Thanks a lot! Have a great night :) >sydburt11

papermidnights

@sydburt11 yeah it was a good story, but there could be some improvements. Like for example the story is moving way to fast, like bam they are getting married and they already have kids, slow the plot down and you should be good :) 
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sydburt11

Just saw you read it. Thanks a lot. It means a lot to me
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sydburt11

Hey! Have you checked out my book? If you have, and you haven't read my update, please do. No rush, just wanting to tell you. Hope you enjoyed it. Thanks! :)
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