Lily

@CherriLove Thank you! ^.^

@maggieb2409 You are most certainly welcome! :)
          I am glad to be able to help in any way ^.^
          Have a wonderful day! :)
          Lily

Thanks for the critique, any advice is very welcome and your comments confirmed a niggling doubt I had regarding the summary. I will re-write it, basically it was sheer and utter laziness because at this stage I had no expectations it would be read by anyone else.
          
          Cheers Marg

Thanks for the follow, hun! ^_^
          xo

@maggieb2409 Hello! I am glad your daughter is a 1D fan haha :). I have just checked out your novel, and I love the description! It's incomparable with other works on Wattpad in my opinion. Are you an experienced writer? I would love to read your future works!
          Have a wonderful day :)
          
          P.S. In my opinion though, i think there is a bit too much detail in your summary- a lot of unfamiliar names might put the reader off from reading further. With that being said though I do love the story! :)

@evalee21 Hello! i will definately check your books out, and im currently writing my first ever fanfic(Hope i dont stuff it up). 
          Thanks for the follow! :D
          Have a wonderful day :)

Hi Lily,
          
          Thank you for the follow, but drat it all, now I have to put some effort into the story to ensure you aren't wasting your time following me. I have actually been busy with a number of other projects so have left this story to languish on the back burner for the last few months, however, your follow has motivated me to begin working on it again, as, and when I have the time.
          I will also pass your user name to my daughter who is a massive 1D fan so that she can keep me updated on your future works.
          You have a great day, Lily
          
          Regards 
          
          maggieb2409
          
          P.S. I also live in the Auckland region.

Hello!! 
          
          I am just a regular high school student in Auckland, NZ :)
          
          I have always loved reading and want to broaden my view on literature by going on this amazing website and discovering many hidden talents out there.
          You may have guessed this from my background, but I am a One Direction fan, and plan to write 1D fanfics later on!
          Currently I am working on a piece already, and can't wait to release it to the world.
          
          Thank you for taking your time to read this ^.^
          Have a wonderful day! :D