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Halo author! 
          Aku butuh kritik dan saran tentang ceritaku di lapak oren ini. 
          
          Kalau author senggang, boleh ya di intip dan beri aku kritik dan saran supaya aku bisa improve (≡^∇^≡)
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/291108386?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Hyerin06_&wp_originator=xRjS46Beer12FW%2FRSA1N5%2BpGGQ8%2Fs%2BrRfi%2BFJoRvv1wEeYadaIlFW7Vjhlyy3m3PGy6b5XE%2BJM5k%2F0wW10TiPvvyU8%2FoFgOAtGG4hlBX2NY7ER6BqmIFeaX6PhklLXXX
          
          Terimakasih. Semangat nulis!