atsumio

Helloo^^ Could you please check out my first story about Yuri Plisetsky called "you again"? Your feedback and support would mean the world to me!! 

parisMCG123

I read it and it was good. I like that I could relate to the protagonist.
            But in some areas you might want to read over because I found some grammar problems.
            You did very well since it is your first story and I'm excited for the end result of your story.
            Good luck and I'm looking forward to it ;)
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parisMCG123

Sure but I'm at school at the moment, like its lunch time right now I'll check it out at home okay 
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