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Sorry guys i've been on another planet lately lol. Back to editing and writing the next chapter for Mr. Sharp. Then i will try to do some editing and writing in The Perfect One that you!

I'm going through Mr. Sharp now & doing some editing and changing some of the dialogue. As I was re-reading I wasn't capturing the personalities I wanted for the two characters. You might want to re-read so you can get a better flow of things, I'm only on chapter 2 now but I will comment when I am finished editing. Then I will work on editing The Perfect One :)

Wow Mr. Sharp went up to 33 reads and 6 votes in one night!! Thank you all so much! You rock! Please feel free to message or comment & give me your feedback! :) 

@lpfeiffer92 oh i see now, i replied. Thank you so much it really helps me out! :)

I did! I commented on all the chapters that I read with a little bit of advice

@lpfeiffer92 did you comment on it? Its not showing and thank you for reading!

Just going around and asking... 
          
          May you read my story?
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/4673041-just-where-she-belongs
          
          I'll be very granted and I could read one of your books in return. ^^ <3
          
          - Kitty  xoxo

I just finished Mr. Sharp, I hope my advice helps you out!

Please check out my two books! I would really love some feedback!! Thank you all so much! Xox