Soraya Carranza

Chapter 4 is now updated. It's a spicy chapter, I hope you will love it! 

I am still working on Chapter 3 of The Kingdom of Phaedora, please bear with me. I was busy with finals and now I have free time to write.

Hope you all enjoy! :) https://www.wattpad.com/story/202561402

Hey, y’all I’m back! And I will update on Secret Gangs Society thank you for waiting patiently. 

Chapters 6 & 7 is out now! :D Happy reading <3

Also I am writing my first sci-fi story that is coming out soon so please keep watch on your notifications for more updates on my stories. Happy Reading :)

Currently writing chapter 6 & 7 those 2 chapters will be coming out together while waiting go check out chapter 1 thru 5 on Secret Gang Society please comment and vote and let me know if you like the story.

Chapter 5 is out! :D  Please comment and vote

Chapter 4 is out! :D
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/97504682

Soraya you have a little problem in your story where you tend to have continuous run on sentences. You need to have more periods every now and then. You can also make sentences longer by adding conjunctions like for,an,nor,but,or,yet,so(FANBOYS). And, along with the fanboy you will use a comma after that this is called a compound sentence. Another way to separate it is using a semi colon instead of the first way. Not trying to say your a bad writer or anything. Just your stories are good but just carry on to where I loose to what I'm reading.