parnicasrimal

its about a 16 year old girl who looses every opportunity to wards her career and how everyone just slowly betrays her....find out more by reading https://www.wattpad.com/story/108761007

parnicasrimal

thanks @RiBlue2293 for giving your views and i will do the changes once post the whole thing so that i  can do it all together... thanks
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bluemingwords

@parnicasrimal    I read the first chapter... I required it to be a bit longer to get a clear perspective on your characters. The cliff hanger seemed foggy, but my curiosity demands some answers ;)
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parnicasrimal

its about a 16 year old girl who looses every opportunity to wards her career and how everyone just slowly betrays her....find out more by reading https://www.wattpad.com/story/108761007

parnicasrimal

thanks @RiBlue2293 for giving your views and i will do the changes once post the whole thing so that i  can do it all together... thanks
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bluemingwords

@parnicasrimal    I read the first chapter... I required it to be a bit longer to get a clear perspective on your characters. The cliff hanger seemed foggy, but my curiosity demands some answers ;)
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