BooksGlitter123

Hello!
          I am BooksGlitter123. I recently started writing my first book in the romance genre it's called "Familiar Cold". I would be really happy if you could check out the book , vote and share. I would be very glad if you could give me feedbacks on how to improve the book too!
          Thank you!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/267250270?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=BooksGlitter123&wp_originator=3wPFUDQR7aPc2qxsW3cN%2FVNFO4bvY%2FW8hbPUqw8ci37dCpVz5kXGP7PDEq9%2FxosIntD55EGuHl4X6LM3bOliNfWx5BFzpsWkm%2FzFBrWsrTc%2BicHjD9Z7WiyMEuYsQ5lZ

partybirb

Hi! You book is really good. My advice would be to use some short sentences so it creates tension and draws the reader in. Don’t over do it though! 
            :)
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