Hey you made a really cool story! I just wanted to give you a few tips. (If you want you of course DON'T HAVE TO READ THIS IF YOU DON'T WANT TO.)
( P.s: no hate it is genuinely a good book!)
So I did realize that in some of your chapters you did forget to add a few periods like in:
"Owners or humans decided to go to the cat café so they asked the owners of the cat cafè if we could could come to visit with the other cats it was all fun in games at first but the this" (Sorry I didn't finish)
When it the "proper" way would have been:
Our owners or 'humans' decided to go to the Cat Café. They asked the owners if we could visit the other cats. The owners said that it was fine with them. It was all fun in games, until this really beefy cat named Stewart no, more like Wart" (once again sorry I didn't finish)
This was just a suggestion this was not meant to hurt feeling s or get anyone mad. It's just I know a few people that get very easily upset at these grammer mistakes. Once again this is JUST A SUGGESTION.
I hope you have a great day or night! And stay safe! :)
