Hey there fellow wattpader, I'm going around checking out newly written works in the mystery genre and happened to stumble across your story. I would love to give it a read.
If you'd like me to read your story and provide you with feedback through regular comments and votes, let me know by dropping me a follow.
If you want to, give my story 'When the Winner Lost' a read(just the description!).
My sole motive behind this approach is to encourage new writers to complete their books and improve. If you are having trouble with something, or just need some moral support, I would be glad to be of help. I'm only a private text away.
Thank you and Happy Writing!
Regards,
@Bizaliewpluto