ATTENTION BBL READERS!!!! i’ve just finished editing the first 10 chapters not including the prologue. i wasn’t correcting typos, i was rewriting a lot. i wrote those in 2023 and i’ve since found my style, so im trying to make everything cohesive. there’s also some plot and character reasons, mainly lori and lonnie.
bc rereading can be tedious, here’s a list:
1 (nothing changed much, dialogue altered)
2 (same as above, dialogue + paragraphs altered/beefed up, tiny details)
3 (beefed up A LOT, new dialogue/details, plot the same)
4 (nothing much, small details)
5 (lots of fun details, lori’s changed a bit, plot’s the same)
6 (first half lots of lonnie details important for later, second half mostly the same/beefed up paragraphs)
7 (first half same/new details, second half VERY important, changed remus and lori’s convo and the boggart storyline)
8 (same plot totally different format, if u read any of these please read this one, the dialogue is severely altered)
9 (plot same, slightly diff dialogue/paragraphs)
10 (altered sirius’s pov way more/changed dialogue)
bare with me, im slow. i have 30+ to edit and 100+ to write from scratch. i’ll get to it when i get to it! and DONT WORRY i am working on a new chapter. i’m halfway done i swear ill get it up soon. anyway, much love xx