paulineholmes_02

Good morning!
          	
          	My Sherlock fanfiction is complete now! However, I can't get rid of the feeling that I've done something wrong. Is the story too stupid? Or badly-written? Boring? Or too brutal? I wish there was more feedback, given the vast amount of time I've dedicated to this story :( Please, tell me what you think.
          	
          	Have a good day,
          	
          	PaulineHolmes02

TheGreat_InkCat

@paulineholmes_02 , I apologize for not being able to provide more feedback on your story earlier, but I'll try writing something now:
          	  
          	  1. Brutal? Not at all! Realistic? Yes, which is what makes it unique.
          	  2. Your writing style is beautiful, and it's also great for practicing English. Now I can finally read Johnlock and brush up on my English skills. *victory dance*
          	  3. Honestly, I never knew I needed a fanfic like this, but it feels like stumbling upon a random coin on the street and it just brings me joy. (Is this metaphor too cringy? Yeah, probably XD)
          	  
          	  Please don't doubt yourself for a second! I know that being a writer isn't easy at first, but as time goes by, your hard work will yield results! Endurance is “elementary, my dear Watson”.  ♥
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paulineholmes_02

@ Whiplash246  Hi, that was one of the most heartwarming replies I've ever received! Thank you so much for your kind words and your support, you made me feel so much better. I'm glad you like the story, I feel honoured. The story means so much to me, it comes right from my heart, and I loved writing every single line. Thank you again!♡
          	  
          	   I'm also very looking forward to your next chapters, I hope you're planning to update your story :)
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Whiplash246

@paulineholmes_02 congrats on completing! 
          	  From what ive read so far its written well and im gonna try commenting more feedback when i get back to it
          	  
          	  No story is too stupid/boring/brutal - as long as you write something YOU wanted to put out, there are others who will like it too, even if its not to *everyone's* taste. In fact, trying to write to satisfy everyone (instead of leaning into your own unique voice) will produce a very bland piece of work. You have not done that.  Your tone, voice and story is unique and fills a niche i didnt know existed. Though i usually stray away from psychological whump storylines, I liked ur story and im sure there will be others who will like it too, and even more than i did if thats their usual type of book.
          	  
          	  There's always room for refinement, improvement and change of one's writing style but you are an excellent writer regardless. Don't doubt yourself❤
          	  
          	  P.s. ik its quite gutting for a project u spend time on to get very little recognition. I hope more readers find ur book! (now that its completed maybe the wattpad algorhythm will give it a boost ;) )
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paulineholmes_02

Good morning!
          
          My Sherlock fanfiction is complete now! However, I can't get rid of the feeling that I've done something wrong. Is the story too stupid? Or badly-written? Boring? Or too brutal? I wish there was more feedback, given the vast amount of time I've dedicated to this story :( Please, tell me what you think.
          
          Have a good day,
          
          PaulineHolmes02

TheGreat_InkCat

@paulineholmes_02 , I apologize for not being able to provide more feedback on your story earlier, but I'll try writing something now:
            
            1. Brutal? Not at all! Realistic? Yes, which is what makes it unique.
            2. Your writing style is beautiful, and it's also great for practicing English. Now I can finally read Johnlock and brush up on my English skills. *victory dance*
            3. Honestly, I never knew I needed a fanfic like this, but it feels like stumbling upon a random coin on the street and it just brings me joy. (Is this metaphor too cringy? Yeah, probably XD)
            
            Please don't doubt yourself for a second! I know that being a writer isn't easy at first, but as time goes by, your hard work will yield results! Endurance is “elementary, my dear Watson”.  ♥
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paulineholmes_02

@ Whiplash246  Hi, that was one of the most heartwarming replies I've ever received! Thank you so much for your kind words and your support, you made me feel so much better. I'm glad you like the story, I feel honoured. The story means so much to me, it comes right from my heart, and I loved writing every single line. Thank you again!♡
            
             I'm also very looking forward to your next chapters, I hope you're planning to update your story :)
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Whiplash246

@paulineholmes_02 congrats on completing! 
            From what ive read so far its written well and im gonna try commenting more feedback when i get back to it
            
            No story is too stupid/boring/brutal - as long as you write something YOU wanted to put out, there are others who will like it too, even if its not to *everyone's* taste. In fact, trying to write to satisfy everyone (instead of leaning into your own unique voice) will produce a very bland piece of work. You have not done that.  Your tone, voice and story is unique and fills a niche i didnt know existed. Though i usually stray away from psychological whump storylines, I liked ur story and im sure there will be others who will like it too, and even more than i did if thats their usual type of book.
            
            There's always room for refinement, improvement and change of one's writing style but you are an excellent writer regardless. Don't doubt yourself❤
            
            P.s. ik its quite gutting for a project u spend time on to get very little recognition. I hope more readers find ur book! (now that its completed maybe the wattpad algorhythm will give it a boost ;) )
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paulineholmes_02

Apparently, there's some kind of bug on Wattpad as my incoming messages keep repeating all over and over, so I can't see what the person who's writing me wants to tell me. Does anyone experience the same problem?
          I hope you're all doing great. 
          Pauline♡