Have re-read and enjoyed; it must be all in the timing of my reading and your updating. THANK YOU so much for the dedication; it is a real honour on such a great story.
Thank you so much for your comment about 'Choices' - it made my day! It's the biggest compliment that you were caught up with reading it and didn't vote :)
Just wanted to let you know your invaluable help is much appreciated. Have been really busy lately, but cleaned up Finding Grace, thanks to you! It really really means so much to me that you took the time to weed through it again. Hope you are well!
Have re-read and enjoyed; it must be all in the timing of my reading and your updating. THANK YOU so much for the dedication; it is a real honour on such a great story.
Hi, thanks so much for your dedication! I would encourage you to reread ch 52, I hadn't posted all of it, and I always click the save an publish, rather than save, so it goes up without being done. Sorry.
@feydoc HI. I have read straight through and thoroughly enjoyed The Guardian. I felt it flowed nicely and moved along at a good pace; I got to know the characters and watched the relationships develop. I'm excited to see how it progresses.
The only oddity I have thought of is Bong-Li; but I'm wondering if she comes up later; she seems to be an important character but I'm not sure where/how she fits in. I also liked the addition of new vampires; you could do spin offs of their stories (lol).
I certainly haven't noticed a 'difference' in the book, just a gradual development of the story and characters.
Are you concerned or had negative feedback?
I might be a bit biased with vampires; I love reading Christine Feehan's dark books which is an adult vampire series brought out before the 'twilight' and vampire diaries craze. And Emil and Evan are right up there with characters I would read again and again.
I'm rambling but I really do like your writing style and characters. I haven't found anything to criticise in my reading.
Good luck with the rest of the story - and thank you for asking my opinion, it means a lot as a reader.
Peta
I have a question for you. It seems you've read my book pretty much straight thru, and I wanted to know if you feel like it flows from theme to theme without sounding like I'm writing two different books. Or if it sounds like it's really different now than at the beginning.
Thanks for reading my book The Guardian and voting, and for becoming a fan! I will be uploading the last 5 chapters over time (I have to work, and have kids, etc.) I'll send out an announcement when I post.
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