Hey there!
I've read your poems and they're wonderful! You've chosen topics that are most people can relate to which I think is important so people can connect to your poems. Your word-choice is good and the final lines in your poems are impacting. 'Fire match' was my favourite because it was well-written and you restrained yourself to use the image of fire throughout the poem. Beautiful work. I hope you keep writing more because I will keep reading :)
Tori xx
okay hi guys you should read my new story "Life measures "! I think it will be great!! tell your friends about it! I think you'll love it!! it would mean the world if you voted and comment! thank you if you do! if you don't thanks for reading the status!!