peachgirl200

I edited "Planting Berries" so that it had an actual conclusion and I also edited some of the sentences and each chapter is longer now (about 1000 words each?)
          	It is definitely better now because that old one was too short and the ending was really sudden so I changed it.

peachgirl200

I edited "Planting Berries" so that it had an actual conclusion and I also edited some of the sentences and each chapter is longer now (about 1000 words each?)
          It is definitely better now because that old one was too short and the ending was really sudden so I changed it.

gen3king

Thanks for adding my story to your reading list. 
          
          Cool profile pic btw

gen3king

@Queenalienella thanks if you have any feedback, ways to improve, lemme know.
            
            Also may I ask, did you draw your profile pic and if so do you take requests?
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peachgirl200

No problem, I really liked the story.
            Also thx
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