I edited "Planting Berries" so that it had an actual conclusion and I also edited some of the sentences and each chapter is longer now (about 1000 words each?)
It is definitely better now because that old one was too short and the ending was really sudden so I changed it.
I edited "Planting Berries" so that it had an actual conclusion and I also edited some of the sentences and each chapter is longer now (about 1000 words each?)
It is definitely better now because that old one was too short and the ending was really sudden so I changed it.
There are always stories on Irondad or Spiderson with Peter and Tony. But what if instead of Tony, it could be Steve! I haven't seen a load of those stories but it could be a fun concept!
@Queenalienella thanks if you have any feedback, ways to improve, lemme know.
Also may I ask, did you draw your profile pic and if so do you take requests?