PeachyBunny

Hi! Do you want a book cover? Dm me on my instagram, geuphros for details. Thann you!

Baka gusto niyo ng book cover? Visit niyo lang wall ni ate @MizzyFantasia, ang gagandaaa.

Wait lang ha, prologue pa lang naman nababasa ko and this is my comment so far.
          
          You’re good with your grammar. A little improvement lang doon ibang part na siguro nalito ka lang sa pagtatype since iba naman iyong nasa una. 
          
          Usage of punctuation marks. Eto talaga. Hyphen (-) is used for connecting words and words lang. Dash—em dash dapat ang mga ginamit mo sa pagkoconnect ng clauses.
          
          Lastly, dialogue tag and action tag. I noticed you’re not using it. Aralin mo iyon kasi ganoon talaga sa pagsusulat ng book.
          
          Example for dialogue tag:
          
          “Sue called me,” she said.
          
          Example for action tag:
          
          “Sue called me.” I saw her rolled her eyes.
          
          Ikaw na bahala hahahaha. Babasahin ko talaga mamaya pramis.

hello! thank you for reading my story! I wish you could have a time to read it until the epilogue since that’s the only chapter i need to publish hahaha. and yes po, Chou Tzuyu was the one in the book cover.
          
          God bless you. Stay safe☺️

Guyss gusto nyo pa bang i update ko yung book na pinublish ko o hindi? please answer my question 

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