peculiar_forever_x

Sorry for the long wait, Fiona’s trial is now up on Miss Peregrines Stories: The Games Master!! It also introduces a brand new character who I can’t wait to write more of and I hope you will all enjoy it❤️

multifandomosity

Hi, its me again! Im done with claire's trial! hope you like it!
          Claire whimpered beside me, tears streaming down her cheeks. I could sympathise with her. We only saw Olive’s limp body being dragged away by the Games Master. For all we knew, Olive could be…
          
          Dead.
          
          Claire and Olive were best friends, almost inseparable. How could he do this to us? To our little gang of peculiars? That brute! That horrible Games Master!
          
          As if he could read my mind, the glass box plummeted down, screeching to a stop and jerking me forward. “Claire Densmore!”the Games Master declared. I wanted to kill him, take control of a hollow and rip him to shreds for all he had done! However, for the sake of Claire, I calmed down. Gripping Claire's hand, I squeezed it. “For Olive,” I whispered. Claire nodded grimly before charging out of the box, leaving me alone with my thoughts. 
          
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          Claire stepped into what seemed like a blank room, furnished with a bed and two doors. She walked over to the bed and sat down cautiously. Was she expected to sleep? She wasn't Horace! Just then, the Games Master appeared in person! Claire leaped at him, backmouth ready to bite. Strangely, she passed right through him! It was a hologram! The Games Master ignored her futile attempt to hurt him. “This is more of a game of chance. One of these two doors,” he stated, gesturing at the doors on Claire’s left, “leads to a blank room while the other leads to certain danger. Or, at least, your worst nightmare.” The Games Master seemed to chuckle as he said so. “If you're lucky enough, the route you take will be free of any danger. You have ten minutes to escape.” He tilted his head to the left, sending shivers down Claire’s spine. “Ready… Begin!”

multifandomosity

@peculiar_forever_x I'm so glad you liked it!!!
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peculiar_forever_x

@multifandomosity ahh I loved it!! Especially the inclusion of Claire’s parents being horrible… interesting bit of backstory there! 
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multifandomosity

“We can hurt you, all right,” her mother threatened, before lunging at her, arms outstretched like a zombie. All too late, Claire realised this was a danger room! Fumbling for the doorknob, she flung a random door open and stumbled inside the room, eyes shut tightly. Hearing the clang of the bars again, she tentatively opened her eyes. To her immense relief, she was safe! Looking up, she realised the door she had gone through was marked with an ‘E’. “Enoch… How ironic!” she laughed. Glancing at the next door, she was pleased to find it was marked with an exit sign! Claire couldn't open the door fast enough, disappearing into the darkness beyond...
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multifandomosity

Hihi, it's me again!
          I've finally finished the whole of Olive's trial! 
          I hope you like it! If it's satisfactory, I'll move on to Claire!
          (3rd person P.O.V. because I didn't know which P.O.V. u were writing from for the trials)
          Olive marveled at her surroundings. It was a quite massive maze, made entirely out of stone, with floor-to-ceiling walls to boot. "You have 15 minutes to navigate this maze. There are four exits, each at every corner of this room. However, there is a catch: the maze will fill up with water. You have two choices, either you walk or take off your lead shoes." The Games Master stated. "Your 15 minutes start... Now!"
          Olive started plodding between the towering stone walls, randomly taking a different route every now and then. Water had already started flowing into the maze, sloshing around her ankles. Gradually, it became harder for her to walk. Just then, she looked up, spying metal hand holds bolted to the ceiling! A lightbulb went off in Olive's head and she undid the straps on her lead shoes, shooting to the ceiling. " Great job, Olive!" She congratulated herself. Gripping the metal bars tightly, she started moving forward. "Left, left, right..." she muttered, trying to make sense of the maze. 
          By then, the water level had risen to what would have been Olive's chin. Fortunately, she was safe on the ceiling. "Five minutes!" the Games Master's voice reverberated in her ears, jolting her out of her mindless state. Olive started to panic, taking random turns. She could hear the water gushing into the maze, filling it up faster than ever. Waves lapped at Olive's back, drenching her and spurring her on. In her panicked state, Olive lost her grip on the bars and plunged into the water!
          Olive thrashed around, frantically trying to paddle to towards the next bend. She was running out of oxygen, and her vision was failing. Just then, her outstretched hands hit a wall. Olive was devastated. Was it a dead end?

multifandomosity

@peculiar_forever_x oh wow! Guess I'm a telepath ;)
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peculiar_forever_x

Love it! Funnily enough, the task I originally had in mind for Olive was a maze! You read my mind haha
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multifandomosity

@multifandomosity (cont.)
            
            Suddenly, a gleam caught Olive's eye. She could faintly make out a red button! She had found the exit! Mustering the last of her strength, she pressed the button. The door swung open, and Olive, along with the water, was swept out of the maze. The last thing she heard before blacking out was the Games Master announcing, " A minute left. You barely made it..." 
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multifandomosity

Hi! Just a reminder but I'm the person who asked you if I could continue 'The Games Master!
          
          So this is what I got so far!
          
          
          "Did Enoch win?" Olive asked, peeking through her fingers. "Yeah! He made it!" I answered, relieved. It was such a fierce battle, one I was sure I would not win, had it been me. We braced ourselves for the descent, and sure enough, the glass box began to move. Only, it started moving up!
          "I'm next!" Olive cried out fearfully. She gripped my pant leg, clinging on like a koala bear. Claire patted Olive's shoulder and whispered in her ear. Whatever she said seemed to calm olive down, and olive miraculously let go of my leg. 
          "Olive Abroholos Elephanta!" The Games Master's voice boomed. Olive squared her shoulders and marched through the door. 
          
          
          If this is ok, I'll go on to Olive's trial!
          
          
          
          
          

multifandomosity

@peculiar_forever_x thanks! I'll try to complete her trial ASAP!
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peculiar_forever_x

Wow, this is great so far! I feel like you’ve done a great job of recreating the writing style. Can’t wait to see her trial! 
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PeculiarShipper

You. Deserve. More. Likes. Followers. And Comments. Also lots of love.... 
          
          Your books are everything

PeculiarShipper

@PeculiarShipper You are welcomed! I am glas it means a lot to you! :)
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peculiar_forever_x

Thank you so much! That means a lot to me :)
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