
Jonnywaita
I think I got some feedback or else some advice for you pal concerning Heart Made Of Steel

Jonnywaita
I beg to differ because when I checked your conversations appear in prose form. @Jonnywaita
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peejay2066
@Jonnywaita That's how I do it, and the expression comes after the speech dear. Thanks tho
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Jonnywaita
I think when It comes to dialogues you should write like I have done below. @Jonnywaita "Hello" "Oh hello there" "You kind of look familiar" ...... As in each response should be in it's line, It helps making the story noticeable
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