pen2pad

Okay, finished that chapter and would L.O.V.E you guys forever if you could check it out and possibly tell me what you think of it *bats eyelashes* Is it too predictable?? Or does it need more "oomph" as people say?? It's just a small favour, so if you have time, pleaassseee do that because I just want to write and make people happy you know.. <3 :) :3 xx

pen2pad

Okay, finished that chapter and would L.O.V.E you guys forever if you could check it out and possibly tell me what you think of it *bats eyelashes* Is it too predictable?? Or does it need more "oomph" as people say?? It's just a small favour, so if you have time, pleaassseee do that because I just want to write and make people happy you know.. <3 :) :3 xx