Shiviwrite555

Hi dear I have updated the new chapter of my story lakeerein please give your precious suggestion and votes 

pen_with_Rudrakshi

@Shiviwrite555 Hello.. 
            
            Thank you so much for updating.. I'll surely read it ASAP:) 
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Shiviwrite555

Thank you for your support and votes

Shiviwrite555

@pen_with_Rudrakshi I am really glad for your suggestion and honest reply. I will try to improve my skills. Thank you 
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pen_with_Rudrakshi

@Shiviwrite555 Hey Shivi, 
            
            I'm truly loving the plot and suspense in your story... Keep it up and never stop no matter what... You're actually doing a great job
            
            Also, if you'd take a little suggestion, a little correction with grammatical errors and a little hint here and there could really enhance the overall setup. For example, I was a bit lost with the dream sequence.. 
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imaginesnher

pen_with_Rudrakshi

@imaginesnher Sure dear and thanks❤
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imaginesnher

@pen_with_Rudrakshi thank you so much for such words, I'll be waiting for your precious review! I hope that you really enjoy the world I have created in this book :) and wattpad doesn't allow all the emojis
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pen_with_Rudrakshi

@pen_with_Rudrakshi Why aren't my emojis showing? Looks like I've ommitted the punctuations
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