pena-fajar

Following three major drafts and a good deal of revamps and revisions, I'm happy to let you all know that my first installment of the Our Life series is finished! Saka a.k.a. The Red Rider and his friends now move along, from being small children to adolescents!
          	
          	Big thank you especially to @Torkuda for his incisive and often upfront feedbacks; here's hope we may continue to work together for the tales to come! 
          	
          	Thank you to all my readers who've stuck on this far; good books mean nothing without loyal readers, and having you all around has been part of what motivated me to conclude this tale. See you in future ones.
          	
          	Cheers!
          	-Pena

MOHU07

"Step into a world where people have amazing crystal powers. UNIFIED W is a story that has been unfolding since August 2021, with 46 exciting chapters and an ongoing plot. It revolves around Kai, the chosen one, and fate chose him to once again reunite the seven clans, who are in a constant civil war with each other for centuries. Although Kai was chosen, his path is full of despair and pain, but a voice keeps telling him; 'one world, one people, one law.' If you're looking for an engaging story filled with thrilling battles, conflicts, and destiny, begin reading UNIFIED W now and let your imagination run wild."
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/280601765?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=MOHU07

Storytellerbook

Where are you from? country?

Storytellerbook

I also wish a wonderful day ahead :)
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pena-fajar

@Storytellerbook Studied it for years; watched films; been using that to help make stories here, among other things. It helps to know other languages too, doesn't it? :D
            
            Though of course, I'm fluent in Indonesian too.
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pena-fajar

Following three major drafts and a good deal of revamps and revisions, I'm happy to let you all know that my first installment of the Our Life series is finished! Saka a.k.a. The Red Rider and his friends now move along, from being small children to adolescents!
          
          Big thank you especially to @Torkuda for his incisive and often upfront feedbacks; here's hope we may continue to work together for the tales to come! 
          
          Thank you to all my readers who've stuck on this far; good books mean nothing without loyal readers, and having you all around has been part of what motivated me to conclude this tale. See you in future ones.
          
          Cheers!
          -Pena

Tristan639

Hi pena I saw your post on my conversations page and I just wanted to say thank you and yes I do need some tips and help because I’m making a book and I don’t have a lot of experience with creating novels. I read some of your books and I thought they were pretty good.
          
          Americas psycho 
          Tristan
          I’m a menace to society 

pena-fajar

@ Tristan639  Good to know ^ Which of my books have you read, btw? And what kind of tips do you feel you need?
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pena-fajar

After just over a year and quite a few edits, the final version of Internal's first book, Viperpath, is at long last FINISHED! 
          
          Thank you all who'd stuck with me for this breathtaking ride (and that's putting it mildly). Can't thank you all enough for your insightful and incisive feedbacks, and I sincerely hope you've enjoyed reading it as much as I did writing it!
          
          See y'all in the next title!
          
          -Pena

Writer_Sama12

Hoiiii how u been ^^

Writer_Sama12

@pena-fajar alrighty sounds good! Hope to see your feedback on my new version as well! I really wanna fix the mistakes I made a lot in my old story so a lot of feedback is appreciated ^^. The new version is "Surviving This Forsaken World" btw. 
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pena-fajar

Hello all.
          
          After a series of feedbacks, I've come to the conclusion that a chapter's separation into three parts may have been uncalled for. Nor, from experience, would such a thing be found in published works.
          
          As such, I decided to readjust the chapters of Internal: Viperpath from scratch into just one part. Feel more workable that way too, considering that most readers would be on their phones and that longer chapters might turn them off (looking at you @Torkuda).
          
          For those readers that's been sticking around despite this odd format, I can only thank you all and apologize if that had been a source of inconvenience. Meanwhile, for those still trying to catch up, no worries- this change won't be reaching your currently-read parts anytime soon; you might still enjoy the tale and no probs. Just know that it's gonna get JUST a little different when next you take a peek.
          
          Ranted long enough, have I? Cheers ^
          
          Pena

pena-fajar

@Writer_Sama12  You're welcome. Hope you'll continue to enjoy them chapters ^
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Writer_Sama12

@pena-fajar I'm a little late but thanks for the announcement to let us know ^^
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Frozefas

@pena-fajar Ha- surprised you didn't mention me here either since I'm always splitting chapters into 2 when I read Internal.
            
            Honestly I feel like the length of the current chapters is fine- but they shouldn't go over a 20min readcount if possible, especially near the beginning where people are trying to ease into the story.
            
            But yeah up to you of course, I'd be fine with the change.
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