penaray

Revamped Chapter Two: Home Unsweet Home is out now!
          	So... I'm sorry it's a couple hours late. I forgot about it and it was already after seven that I remembered.... so, because I don't want to speed type out a 2k+ chapter again in as short of time as I possibly can, I'm moving it from 7pm to 9pm...
          	ALSO: sorry, but I added a small scene in the beginning of chapter one okay bye.

penaray

I think I rewrote that entire chapter in under an hour :| my fingers were *flying*
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penaray

Revamped Chapter Two: Home Unsweet Home is out now!
          So... I'm sorry it's a couple hours late. I forgot about it and it was already after seven that I remembered.... so, because I don't want to speed type out a 2k+ chapter again in as short of time as I possibly can, I'm moving it from 7pm to 9pm...
          ALSO: sorry, but I added a small scene in the beginning of chapter one okay bye.

penaray

I think I rewrote that entire chapter in under an hour :| my fingers were *flying*
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penaray

Alright, listen up:
          
          Revamped chapter one in Big City Villain has been… revamped again.
          
          Um and if you wanted to, you could give it a read or a skim and if you wanted to, you can even get attached because I figured out a new piece of the puzzle and I adore it and I want to see it through to the finish…
          
          Updates Monday @ 7pm Pacific time, imagine it as if it’s a TV show and that’s when the episode aires, I’ve always wanted to do that so I’m doing it now. New episodes every Monday. Sure. Sounds like fun.
          
          *internal screaming*
          
          Signed
          Pencakes.

penaray

@CarterRayHydra thanks for your support!!
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penaray

Hey everyone! Just an announcement:
          Survive the Wildlands BOOK TWO of Become a Legend (the Legendary Trilogy) is coming out on Kindle and Paperback 03/04/2026! So get ready to March Fourth with Maroon as he battles new challenges, internally and externally, because sometimes a journey is two-fold: literal and, the most painful of all: emotional.
          
          yeah that totally did not sound like an infomercial...

penaray

Remember when scathing book review books here on Wattpad was a thing? I don't know if it still is, I haven't been on here for a long time... but, this is my formal apology to any and all books I reviewed in the 'book review book's I had. I cringe in memory. Remember, reviews are subjective so just because one person doesn't like it, doesn't mean others will feel the same! If you get a bad review on your work, try not to read more into it and ignore the haters, they probably hate themselves too... and that all being said, moving forward, I don't think I'm ever going to write another bad review

Supernatural-geek

@penaray I do think there is a difference between constructive criticism and just plain hateful reviews because someone simply didn't like it.
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penaray

GUYS!!! I’m self-publishing Become A Legend (previously known as City Seven/Burn the City Down) AND PRE-ORDERS ARE LIVE ON AMAZON!
          Paperback will be released 3/1/2025!
          Link will be in my bio!

penaray

@CorvusPitch Thank you Corvus!
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CorvusPitch

I’m so excited for you!!
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penaray

Chapter Eleven: Just when It Was Getting Good of BCV is out now!

penaray

You know what’s hard? I’m writing two novels right now, right? I’ve got BTCD and the MC there uses archaic words and metaphors and such. Coal is just a modern day high schooler with a fairly average vocab. Switching between those two voices is so hard. I feel like the voice in this chapter isn’t right and I’ve been trying to fix it, but I think I made it sound bland instead. Aaaauuuggghhhh.
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penaray

I’m not very proud of it tho and I’m not sure what else to do with it. Oh well.
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penaray

OKAY so update hopefully coming soon! I’ve hit a bit of a writer’s block and I’ve been trying to figure out how to work out this scene.
          
          ALSO MORE IMPORTANTLY: Ya’ll remember Flaming Spark? (NO SPOILERS) he’s an upcoming character in BCV… Anyway, I’ve never really cared for his name, so I’m changing it to Flare.
          If there is another superhero book here on Wattpad with a hero or villain character named Flare please please please please do not tell me because it took me a hot minute to figure out his new name and I kinda like it so I don’t want to have to change it again… (but that being said… do tell me because I do not want to plagiarize) anyway hopefully coming out with a chapter today or tomorrow!  

Dusk-Arrows

Excellent! I’m excited 
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