I read your new chapter and I'm left wanting to find out what happens next! You're great at expressing a characters emotions and creating tension. I really wanna know if Lilah and Claudia become friends or enemies. ( > . < )
The emotions showed in your second chapter was so realistic. Your story so descriptive and captures every detail.
Keep up the good work! ( > . < ) can't wait for the next chapter.
Your story's really good and interesting! Especially the last part. That got me good. Oh my god I actually can't wait. Update please.
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Sorry I'm really into reading. I'll stop waffling and go now.