penepener

I have made one chapter of a book called reincarnation. Plz read it!!!

Crying_Burning_Liar

it's better to start out reading other fan fiction's before creating one yourself, you'll have to find out your writing style and how you pay attention to details. One example of a writing style is based around the main characters point of view, or, as we fanfic writers call it: POV. It could be third POV: the authors perspective, or the First POV: a characters POV. I hope you already know this though so I won't have to explain... :)
          Are you adding in enough details? the glare of the sunlight, or the vapor erupting from someone's mouth on a chilly day? Are your paragraphs separated with double space? 
          if the point of your story is to grab emotion from the readers, you'll have to make sure to use lots of details, but don't make ongoing sentences.
          ... did I help at all?? I hope I at least gave some info...
          :)

penepener

that actually helped a lot
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