penielic

‘My phone buzzes. I pull it out and see it’s a text...
          	“Don't worry, Daddy. Your little princess is safe with me. For now. ”
          	The blood drains from my face.”
          	
          	One text. One stranger. And Graham’s daughter is missing. How far will he go? And can he save her before it’s too late?
          	
          	 Read here: https://www.wattpad.com/1584395852-the-guarded-billionaire-twenty-five-every-parent%27s

penielic

‘There’s no sign she was ever here. Not even a bent hedge or a scuff mark.
          My phone is in my hand before I consciously decide to call her bodyguard, Nick. The phone rings three times and goes straight to voicemail. My jaw clenches so tight, it aches.
          “Damn it.”’
          
          She’s gone. No trace. No answer. No clue how.
          What happens next will push Graham to his limits.
          
           Read the full chapter here to see how it all unravels:
          https://www.wattpad.com/1582978669-the-guarded-billionaire-twenty-four-gone

penielic

“I scroll down to see Graham's response, but it's not what I expected: "Interesting. This seems different from your usual messages." 
          The response hits me like cold water. He's noticed. Graham Westwood didn't become a billionaire by missing details. But it gets worse. Much worse.”
          
          Graham has noticed something is off, and it’s coming from Tessa’s text messages. What happened? How bad is it? Spoiler: it's BAD. Read the Chapter to find out!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1582977597-the-guarded-billionaire-twenty-two-video-betrayal

penielic

‘“You keep checking your phone.”
          My hand freezes halfway to my pocket. "No, I’m not."
          "You've checked it and smiled at it at least five times since you got here." A slow, knowing smile spreads across her face. "Either you won the lottery or there's a man involved in this mysterious happiness."
          My phone suddenly feels heavier in my pocket. “I don’t know what you’re talking about,” I say, but my voice comes out higher than usual.
          Kristen’s eyes gleam with triumph. She’s not going to let this go.’
          
          BUSTED.  Kristen's been watching, and she KNOWS something's up. You can only hide a secret crush for so long before your best friend figures it out. And now? There's no escape.
          
           See what Kristen discovers in this chapter:
          https://www.wattpad.com/1582976123-the-guarded-billionaire-twenty-one-the-man-on-my

penielic

‘“Sophie—”
          “No!” She backs toward her bathroom, shaking her head. “Just... no. I can’t do this anymore.”
          I reach for her arm. She jerks away from my touch like I’ve burned her, stumbling backward into the bathroom. The door slams with enough force to rattle the frame. The lock clicks immediately after.’
          
          When she'd rather lock herself in the bathroom than face you...  Graham's losing the one person he has left, and he doesn't know how to fix it. Everything is falling apart in real time. Read the chapter here:
          https://www.wattpad.com/1581526518-the-guarded-billionaire-twenty-fury

penielic

“Finally, she whispers, “You always have to be right, don’t you?”
          Instead of answering, I reach out and pull her into a hug. For a moment, she’s stiff in my arms. Then she melts against me, and I feel her relax. But as I hold her, her eyes glance up at mine with a sly, calculating look. A tiny, victorious smirk appears on her lips. It’s the expression of someone who thinks they’ve successfully manipulated the situation.
          That’s when I realize my daughter is trying to play me.”
          
          What looks like a tender moment between father and daughter turns into something far more dangerous. The guarded billionaire isn’t the only one in the family who knows how to play games.
          
           Read the full chapter “Manipulation” to see how the tables turn:
           https://www.wattpad.com/1581521765-the-guarded-billionaire-nineteen-manipulation

penielic

‘You’re quiet again. Did I make the great Mr. Westwood speechless?” she says in the next recording.
          “Not speechless. Just listening,” I murmur.
          “To what?”
          “To the sound of your voice.”’
          
          It’s the kind of silence that says everything. He’s not just listening, he’s falling for the Sound of Seduction. Read it here:
           https://www.wattpad.com/1578622690-the-guarded-billionaire-eighteen-sound-of

penielic

 Sneak Peek:
          'Her text reads: “You’re tricking me.”
          I stare at the words and the corners of my mouth lift. If she thinks I’ve tricked her, then the voice message is doing exactly what I intended. It's unsettling her in the right way.
          The best part is she says I’m tricking her, yet she’s still here texting.'
          
          She says he’s tricking her, but she hasn’t stopped replying. The game between them has started, and Graham’s already winning.
          
           Dive into this chapter: Her Voice to feel the shift neither of them saw coming:
           https://www.wattpad.com/1578620824-the-guarded-billionaire-seventeen-her-voice

KiwiAndKoalas

hey! i saw your message on a book club and was wondering if you’d like to support each other as writers by reviewing each others books! mine’s called ‘the price of gold’. no worries at all if you’re too busy or if it’s not your genre! thanks and have a great day (: 

KiwiAndKoalas

@penielic hey, reviews as a casual reader are fine. just keen to hear any thoughts rather than formal edits haha. thanks and loving your story so far! 
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penielic

@KiwiAndKoalas Just went through your reviews and realized they were a different kind from what I did. I do two kinds of reviews (reviews like a editor would and casual reviews like a reader would). I wrote more of the latter because if I review the story as an editor, there'll be way less comments since it takes much more time. 
            
            I also noticed you're in Eunonia bookclub and figured you might want more of the first. Well, just tell me which you prefer.
            
            *Review of synopsis done*
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penielic

@KiwiAndKoalas Review of prologue completed
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