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The Amazing Spider-Man x MHA (OC)
While rereading the earlier chapters, I realized that some of them no longer fully reflect how I see the story now. In a few places the pacing feels off, in others the characters don’t act exactly the way I originally intended, and in some scenes I simply feel they could be stronger.
That said, I don’t want to rush into rewriting anything on my own. I know some readers might actually like the parts I’m considering changing, or might find a rewrite unnecessary or even strange.
So instead, I’d really like to hear your thoughts. If there are any chapters you feel would benefit from a rewrite – or moments that stood out to you as weaker or less polished – please let me know.
The overall plot will stay the same, but the goal would be to make the dialogue, presentation, and atmosphere more consistent with the later chapters. Any feedback is genuinely appreciated.
God616
@pentv1 At this point you made an incredible thing about this concept for oc Spider-Man in My Hero Academia. Well, except for the part about Toga in the camp, it was out of context. She fell in love when he was injured, then they first met when she was attacking Ochako. But I think everything is fine in my opinion don't change things
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pentv1
The Amazing Spider-Man x MHA (OC)
While rereading the earlier chapters, I realized that some of them no longer fully reflect how I see the story now. In a few places the pacing feels off, in others the characters don’t act exactly the way I originally intended, and in some scenes I simply feel they could be stronger.
That said, I don’t want to rush into rewriting anything on my own. I know some readers might actually like the parts I’m considering changing, or might find a rewrite unnecessary or even strange.
So instead, I’d really like to hear your thoughts. If there are any chapters you feel would benefit from a rewrite – or moments that stood out to you as weaker or less polished – please let me know.
The overall plot will stay the same, but the goal would be to make the dialogue, presentation, and atmosphere more consistent with the later chapters. Any feedback is genuinely appreciated.
God616
@pentv1 At this point you made an incredible thing about this concept for oc Spider-Man in My Hero Academia. Well, except for the part about Toga in the camp, it was out of context. She fell in love when he was injured, then they first met when she was attacking Ochako. But I think everything is fine in my opinion don't change things
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JetFreeze
I hope that after MHA Heroes Rising it's possible to do a Spider-Man: Into the Spider-Verse arc in the middle of S5 or before MHA World Heroes Mission?
pentv1
@JetFreeze I'm definitely a fan of the Multiverse, but I'm not sure it's right for Arashi.
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Saginumaozeri
Hi. I love your work on Arashi and I hope you're doing well. I have a question: will he come into contact with the black symbiote?
pentv1
@Saginumaozeri Apologies for the late response, I missed the notification. As of Season 4, Arashi still doesn’t have a love interest. However, I’ve been seeing a growing number of "Arashi × Momo" comments lately, so who knows where that might lead.
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pentv1
Goodbye 2025, Hello 2026! What a Journey It's Been!
Happy New Year, everyone!
As I sit here waiting for the clock to strike midnight, I can’t help but look back at how this incredible journey started. It feels like just yesterday, but the calendar tells me it’s been a year full of heroes, aliens, and adventure.
It all began on February 22, 2025, when I published Chapter 1 of "Alikhan - The Wielder of the Omnitrix". Since then, we’ve journeyed through 42 parts of galactic chaos and heroism.
Then, just a week later on March 2, 2025, a new web was spun. Arashi Nakamura swung into U.A. High in "The Amazing Spider-Man x MHA", and 92 parts later, he's grown from a kid in a hoodie to a hero-in-training battling the forces of evil.
That is 134 chapters written in less than a year. None of this would have been possible without YOU—my readers. Thank you for every read, every vote, and every comment that kept me motivated to write "just one more chapter."
Here’s to 2026! New villains, new aliens, and new heights await. ️⌚
Happy New Year!
pentv1
Happy Holidays❄️⛄
JetFreeze
Happy Holidays !!
ConnorG17732005
Hey, when you continue your Symbiote arc for your BNHA X Spider-Man story can you add quotes from Spider-Man two PS5 where when smiles and Spider-Man finding each other.
ConnorG17732005
https://youtu.be/ZriOt-KENKA?si=nnquZG2eSIHpzjQW Look at this video and listen to these quotes start at 12:00 of the video.
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TheWrittenIdiot
Hey dude. Been reading your story for a bit Pretty good. Definitely would recommend to others. Anyways, have a great day.
gyoondiary
Don’t feel too rushed to have a set pairing in terms of love interests for Arashi, a lot of fanfic writers tend to get pressured into making a pairing even if it doesn’t make sense, and it can spoil the story. Personally, I feel as if the story is progressing just fine without one