pepperbella12910
Wow guys! Fifteen new reads overnight, thanks so much! I would love some comments, or some votes, if you feel like "Second Best" deserves them. I'll post a new chapter tonight.
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CatherineLemesle
Ok . I like the way you describe the feelings of the characters because , as they seem so real, when they talk, it's like if I'm watching a movie. I can see them. For exemple, "my sexy voice" is hilarious because I can imagine the person saying that while being happy and 'hard to believe '.
pepperbella12910
@CatherineLemesle Thank you. I actually have a friend with a really deep, strong voice and that's what I call him, so I'm glad it came off the right way.
pepperbella12910
Hey guys- take a look at "Second Best" if you get a chance - I'm always open to constructive criticisms and suggestions. Let me know what you think!
lucygotapen
Hello! I wanted to thank you for the follow. I hope you get the chance to read my story! Make sure to let me know what you think when you do. I appreciate all the feedback I can get! ❤️