percabethshipper114

Please don't use my real name, and can you delete your message that contained my real name?!?!?

Hello! I said I'd check out your stories, and, well, I always keep my promises :).
          
          First off, I think your story has potential, but you have to fix your capitalization, and punctuation. If you do this, it will greatly improve the quality of your stories. Also, it doesn't hurt to double spellcheck your work~!
          
          Ok, that's it.
          
          Bye~!

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