perksofbeingnat

@arcticashton Course! I love the plot and character development (: I'm reading it really slowly bc I've been really busy, but I love it! Brilliant username by the way♡

perksofbeingnat

@kimmygibbler I read through 'Savior' and am flattered that you asked me to read it. The plot and perspective was so unique. I am very fond of Andy's character. You seem to have a very developed plot. The only thing that I would change is to make the scenes more emotionally charged because the characters are feeling so much. Use your word choice to convey that (: Great job on it! Xxx.

kimmygibbler

Thank you so much. I'm actually really trying to work on the emotional part of my writing. Thanks again! xoxo
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