Peyton

what i’ve found to be helpful, is take a break from what you’re trying to write, and work on something else. do a short story, or a poem, or a one shot, just something different to get some creative juices flowing! sometimes writing something in a different context can give you insight and inspiration on what you’re trying to write. sorry for being gone so long, i never have time to write anymore so i’m not on here much <3

@peytondaleighn It's alright. Sorry about the breakup. I hope everything is going well, take as much time as you need ^_^

@Wolfmoxie I've been using grammarly for a few days and it's been alright but I still think my book could be better though, I always think the story doesn't make sense or I keep repeating a scene, can you look though my new chapters and see if it makes sense? Thank you ^_^

@Wolfmoxie that is helpful thank you ^_^

personally what i like to do, is plan a chapter i want to be the flashback. something can happen that triggers a trauma response, then go into detail about how you developed it. let’s say the character was cheated on by an abusive S/O and a key phrase in that relationship was “it’s not a big deal, you’re overreacting and you look crazy”. someone could say “you look crazy right now” which could throw you into a flashback to those experiences which gives reasoning for a trauma response

@Wolfmoxie for the next chapter, you could do a filler for now while you get some inspiration. you could do a chapter of the reader just going about their day, maybe they encounter someone at a park with Sirius and make a new friend, run into ethan at the store and you guys chat for a bit and maybe have tea at your apartment and sirius takes an interest to him! i like to pull inspiration from songs, which is why in my JSE fanfic, all the chapters are different songs. you could do that with books, music, shows, movies, hell you could base a chapter off of a stuffed animal if you wanted!

@Wolfmoxie i definitely forgot i was gonna read through it  working on that now!

@Wolfmoxie Thank you for helping, I get writer's block to often and this will help a lot!

you did it honey!! of course i will, that was my plan <3

@Wolfmoxie really! I actually made it perfect!? I feel proud! Thank you for helping, can you still look through new chapters to make sure I didn't forget anything?

ITS FUCKING PERFECT!!!!