Hi. Can I tell you this? I like how you narrate your story. Very informative and descriptive. While reading it, I can't help but to smile. I could see my way of writing in yours. Nakakatuwa. Even though it has a lot of flaws (lahat naman ng mga kwento) Still, It catch my attention. Too good for a beginner. You know what? You deserve more reads and votes! Di hamak na mas magaling ka kesa sa iba. So cheer-up and keep on inspiring others through your works! Good bless.