phantomchan
I’m always complaining about angsty teenage characters, but then I always somehow end up writing one of my own :o
phantomchan
phantomchan
I’m supposed to be focusing on my first book, but then I have this urge to start a new one and I’m like,,,
STAWP IT THIS IS WHY YOU HAVE NO ACTUAL PUBLISHED BOOKS ON WATTPAD
phantomchan
omggg writing is freakin’ difficult has anyone told you that already? well here i am giving you a heads up.
like,, i’ve changed the plot of my book a billion times, changed the pronoun from first to third person countless of times (stuck to third person thank you for asking), waited months to find a suitable ending and beginning sentence...
and now, if you guys wanna know where i am on my draft:
it’s a mess. i don’t know myself. since i’ve changed the plot i’ve gotta rewrite the whole first half of the book—but i’m nearly done with the second half so that’s promising??
lmao watch it when it takes me a few years and i submit to the 2040 wattys... that won’t even be surprising knowing the pace i’m going at
so how is your writing going? i hope you guys are doing better xD
Hadley_Swiss
@phantomchan not quite. I managed NaNoWriMo once, and that one was called Elysia, but it was less a story I loved (although I liked the concept when I began) and more proof that I could finish a draft... without years going by... great motivation!
Hadley_Swiss
Tell me when you write something! I remember loving the last thing I read of yours... I look forward to what you come up with in the future!
Thanks for all the votes, comments and in-need-of-editing point-outs ;)
phantomchan
@Hadley_Swiss thank you! :) I wanted to change the title to TVSOB but my brother kept whining about how it sounded so abstract... But I'm like... That’s the pOinT
Hadley_Swiss
@phantomchan personally, I prefer The Vicious Side of Beauty because it sounds intriguing - and because Broken Wings sounds like a lot of other titles I’ve seen before, but the choice is really yours.
alcremietea
Review for Broken Wings: 9/10
Advice:
Try using paragraphs. I find paragraphs helpful.
Try stretching the scenes more and expanding the beginning. The plot should come around the middle of the story; not the beginning lol. I might have gotten this mixed up though.
Not Advice Just Some Stuff:
I really liked the cover and illustrations. Beautiful.
phantomchan
Thanks for your advice! When I'll edit it, I'll make sure to add those in. Also no, I didn't make the cover -- my friend did. Her account is @shinigami_cake if you're interested, but rn she's busy making her manga so she may not have the time
alcremietea
Also, did you make the cover? If it's possible, can you make one for me? It would be appreciated :D
ChrisBieniek7
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