phatpen

Hi there! So I was asked by Ellenfairyblue4 to help give feedback on their story. I'm no expert, but going through their comments I noticed you! You did a wonderful job of giving feedback and aiding in the flow of the story and filling a couple plot holes. I would sincerely appreciate it if you could do that for me and my story "We Walk Among". If you don't have time it's no problem at all, I'd just greatly appreciate your input! Thanks :)

No problem!!! 

hey there. Don't know if you're up for reading poetry, but if so could you check out Midnight Madness? It would be much appreciated. Thanks.
          
          -Onyx

Hello, still available for critiquing?

Hey will you check out my story 'Chances And destinies'? And some honest feedback will be extremely helpful and appreciated. Thanks!!!