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hey!! thanks for adding Falling In The Ocean to your library, i hope you like it ;)

Hello there, my friend. I just wanted to thank you for adding my story to your library. It means the world to me!
          
          I hope that you find "Knight Rider" to your liking. ♥  Comments are my favorite, so if you think of any way I can improve it, please let me know! I will also read your story in return! And by the way, I absolutely adore your profile image and background! ♥
          
          Thanks again! And may the stars shine upon you.

no problem just update :)

I noticed that my story is in your library and I just wanted to say thank you so much!! It means a lot to me! =) 
          Also, thank you for commenting (I'm not sure if I already told you that). 

Thanks :)

Hey there! I saw that one of my friends had commented on your page, and I thought you name was pretty, so hi there! By the way, your profile is interesting. I like it! :3 

thanku very much for the encouragement.......i plan to update soon so i hope u will check it out.....also it wud really mean a lot if u could perhaps vote for all the chapters u like....this novel can use all thesupport it can get.

thanks :) I won't make him seem stupid, he'll just terribly misunderstand the prophecy and feel stupid when it's explained to him.

narrow mindness coul be mistaken for stupidity. The plot is good though  :)

The action starts later on in the book and the villain is meant to be narrow minded, but I won't give away the ending. I was a little worried because all my friends were saying that it was moving too fast so I slowed it down a bit. But thank you for your comment and I'll keep it in mind while writing more :)