skyler_clawfield

I'm stuck! I can't come up with any good ideas for the next chapter. What should I write about?

phukhanh0661

@skyler_clawfield hi, how are you? I just read your new chapter and I was surprised that you have the same thought with me about add a new character who bully Sky in the past (Max) . I was thinking that maybe in the future when the relationship between Sky and Kevin getting closer, Max will move to Kevin’s school for some reasons. Then he will bully Sky again and make him feel desperately. After Kevin see Sky’s injuries and know his past, he will definitely furious (maybe lost control) and fight with Max. I still don’t know what will happen next but surely that event will make Sky don’t have any fear with Kevin anymore. But before it happens, the story should have some events like go camping, Kevin invite Sky to go the amusement park, or maybe some misunderstanding that make Sky avoid Kevin,… These are all my ideas when I read this chapter. You can consult it and add or reduce anything (it’s up to you).
            And thanks for this new chapter, it was great  
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skyler_clawfield

@phukhanh0661 Perfect!! You are the best❤️
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phukhanh0661

Hm…..maybe you can write a chapter talk about Kevin’s life before and after met Sky from the Kevin’s perspective. Like what is he thinking about everyone or everything (or you can say that is a backstory about Kevin but under his perspective, not his father or Sky). It not just helps us understand Kevin’s personality, but also it can last more time for you to think more ideas for the story. That is all my opinion, I’m sorry that I can’t help you. Although you asked me suddenly and now I had no ideas, I will try to find more good ideas and text to you. I will help you as my best because I really love your story❤️
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skyler_clawfield

Hi, 
          If you are okay with it, could you please give me some ideas for the opening of the next chapter of my book? I can't think of anything good.

phukhanh0661

@skyler_clawfield I’m not good like you think. I just have a couple of ideas but I have no idea how to write. Beside, let me fix the message I texted to you “if you want to change someone’s attitude, you should give them a time to do that”
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phukhanh0661

@skyler_clawfield that is what I want too, but I want him change himself slowly. In real life, it’s really hard to change someone from a bad guy to be a good guy. That’s why on the rooftop, Kevin should force Sky on there because he is still a bully right now. If you want to change, you should give them a time to do that.
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skyler_clawfield

Maybe you should try writing your own story someday.
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