piercethevineil
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i just got diagnosed with autism idk what to feel
sugarbblast
i'm not trying to hate or anything like that, but is it just me who noticed the ai-ish writing in lule dremiqare bnha, i don't pay attention to the comments so idk if anyone noticed yet, i've been reading that book & i'm on the threshold part.. & like as im reading up until chap 27? if iirc, i have been really getting that suspicion that the writing is weird. at first i didn't really wanna judge since ive read some of the authors other fics & they're so freaking great icl & i didn't get that feeling it was ai before. but with the new fic it was just like really off.. now im not sure if their writing style has changed but ion think it was the same as the writing on their other books ( im not %100 sure, since i haven't read the bro.. fic in a while ) uhm anyways, i searched about ai writing fics in tt & they mentioned the patterns ai use for paragraphs / sentences.
then i skipped back on recomence 1 and read until recommence 10, & i counted 25? obvious ai writing. ( i might've lost count, & some sentences i gave the benefit of the doubt & didn't add to the count )
the pattern i used as ref is the 'it's not__, it's not__, it's __' or 'it's not__, it's/but __'
& i also noticed some paragraphs or sentences having that kind of weird vibe ( sigh.. i can't explain but if you've had chat-gpt generate some story for u before you'd get it. ) some chapters don't really have that vibe, like the routine part i don't think there was anything that off about it.
as i said im not rlly trying to hate on the author but i don't think they gave any note or warning that the book was gonna have some ai generated writing.
piercethevineil
thank you a lot, @sugarbblast ! i'm going to rewrite the conflicted chapters soon after my final examinations are finished, then upload them all into one again at the latest chapter! adding to this reply, i just had a conversation with my friend that i trusted my fanfic with—and sadly, she ended up confirming that she did rely on chatgpt and gemini; right now i don't have the heart (or calm mind) to reply to her again after that message of hers. it's just unsettling; more even heavy on my shoulders, and i'm still disappointed at her for using a tool where it ended up with my story basically getting so many conflicts in the details and the writing style itself. i can't imagine how many people were confused and conflicted reading some parts while dubious that they were ai-generated :( but anyway, no, your commentary about it on my board wasn't the least bit rude or anything of the sort! if ever, i'm most grateful to you since you pointed it out even, since if you hadn't i wouldn't even notice it. again—thank you so much!! please enjoy your day, or night! <3
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sugarbblast
@piercethevineil hello, thank you so so much for replying & clearing it up for me ! i'm really sorri if my message came of as rude or anything like that—i just really wanted to ask for confirmation.. i hope this doesn't unmotivate you in any way because i rlly rlly adore your fics ! your explanation rlly cleared things up, that's why on some chapters it feels like your normal writing style & on some it's just off.. ( not trying to frame your close friend for the ai writing but it honestly does get weird on some chapters.. )but the plot is honestly so good , again thank yew for clearing it up for me ! I'll continue to read n support your work c:
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piercethevineil
@sugarbblast hi! thank you for telling me about it, honestly i wasn't sure how it would go since i usually write in third person, and when i tried second person with the "you"/"your" it was quite difficult. i read some other fanfiction with the same pov and made them as reference, but everytime i do i kind of cringe since i'm not really well off in that style, especially with the genre of the story. when i looked through reddit about how to make the writing look glum or scared in a way in the perspective of a child, i read on how the character should repeat words and use simple terms; how they should follow the words of an adult or those circling her. another thing is that i don't proof read my writing, been really busy with university recently and i trusted my drafts to my close friend. she's the one who finishes them off and publishes it in my stead; i only ever get to read the comments once a week but not the chapter entirely. thanks for telling me about the ai-ish writing, though. i'll talk to her about it and possibly give the entire story a rewrite, i really don't tolerate the use of it and hate how it's used in my writing, hence why it's probably changed in some chapters of the story like you said. pardon my rudeness if there's any tone of it in my message! i'm just really upset right about hearing about the use of ai. again, many thank yous!
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-lovelylulls-
I absolutely adore your storyyy, it's sooo good.
piercethevineil
i just got diagnosed with autism idk what to feel
kibuzan
ANOTHER NEW BOOK??? YAYY!
piercethevineil
@kibuzan aww, that's such a sweet thought! but please don't rush yourself and only write when you feel like it. i know how much writer's block is a bummer, so don't force yourself!
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kibuzan
@piercethevineil I'm also trying to finish my story as soon as possible so you could read it (i remember you telling me you read finished works) so I'm excited to know ur opinion! ur my Wattpad friendo, that's why ❣️
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kibuzan
heyoo! buddy! i hope you're doing well! just checking up on you since now I've got a fear of losing my online friends from the 'good ol days', hehe.
i hope you're still writing the book, no matter how much time you take. I've been working on my books too, and i hope we can yap and comment on each other's works like back then.
take care of yourself, i hope your works never disappear. come back soon! ❣️
kibuzan
@kibuzan @piercethevineil thank you very much for replying, because yesterday i was in an anxiety frenzy. with so much happening in the world, im afraid of losing everything that once meant a lot to me, and idk why it hit harder yesterday when i revisited some old books i used to read, to see some haven't been updated in years, authors gone, and kny community on Wattpad being so silent and all that. life is hard.. though i wish one day they all do return. I'll continue working on my book, long enough that you'll be able to read them. i too am working on my book, but the lack of engagement really demotivates me. i even contemplated quitting entirely.. but ig that wouldn't be how it's supposed to be for me.. I've got to work hard for my past self atleast. and maybe in the future we'll get to see a glimpse of the golden days once again. im grateful that you consider us friends still, and our time together is just as precious to you..i hope we can stay connected long time even outside Wattpad. hope you do well, I'll be here. (Wattpad wont allow me to reply to you on the profile)
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piercethevineil
@kibuzan hey! it's so good to see this message. to be reall, you’re not being pushy at all—it’s actually really nice to know the 'good ol days' meant as much to you as they did to me. 2021-2023 was the time of our lives because of quarantine and we had nothing else to do after all—wattpad was at its prime LOL. i definitely still consider us friends—dont cha worry :)) i’m still chipping away at my book (slowly but surely grr), and i'd love to hear more about what you're working on too—unfortunely i can't read them yet since i hate being left on a cliffhanger a LOT GRAAAH don't stress about that 'nuisance' of a chapter; we've all been there LOLOLOLL. can't wait to yap about random shenanigans again soon tho. take care!!
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kibuzan
@kibuzan (I'm not much into other fandoms, but just to clarify, i was talking about 'BRO', and dw haha, I'll re-read them once i finish with this big nuisance of chapter three im working on. i plan on commenting once again on everything so we can be nostalgic together.) good luck with your bnha book! lots of love! (i hope you do consider us friends from the good old days because i do form emotional connections very quickly, especially because of the fun time I used to have with you. i hope im not pushy or anything!)
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kibuzan
OMG YOU'RE BACKK
kibuzan
@piercethevineil haha i was planning on re-reading your book to catch up (still remember the early Muzan Tamayo and Y/N shenanigans, the makeover stuff from chapter 6 i believe. wahh it's been years!
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_-Mizuki-_
it's been a month bubba</3 bro was not playing when they said it'd take another century huh... hope you're doing well <3
piercethevineil
im already at 8000 words (longest chapter yet!?) BUT the pacing is so off....... so u guys will have to wait another century for bro.. >_<
Fandom_Trash202
take as long as you’d like , we’ll be waiting <3 excited for what you’re cooking up
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piercethevineil
do you guys WANT the basketball head as a love interest because i MIGHT... might do something about koyuki..............